All about em-dashes

Q: What’s the difference between a hyphen, an em-dash, and an en-dash? How do I use them correctly? 

 

Let’s start with the basics.

Hyphens are the shortest kind of “dash,” and are used for forming compound words, like mother-in-law. The word “hyphen” comes from Old Greek, and means something along the lines of “together,” or “in one.” So it makes sense that we use them to bring words together!

En-dashes are a slightly longer dash. Traditionally, they were the approximate length of the character “N,” hence the name. These are used for spans of numbers (like years), scores, or to connect concepts or words that aren’t compounds (for example, a Washington–Dallas flight). Because there isn’t a quick and easy way to add en-dashes to text (they have to be inserted as a special character), in day-to-day writings they are frequently replaced with hyphens, and the world continues turning. However, if you plan to publish a professional work, care should be taken to use the en-dash where appropriate.

Em-dashes are the longest dash. They’re called em-dashes because—you guessed it—they’re approximately the length of the character “M.” Em-dashes are used to set apart text in a sentence.

Most writers will find themselves encountering the em-dash more often than the en-dash. So, naturally, it’s the trickiest to use.

The em-dash can be used to replace three types of punctuation: commas, parentheses, or colons.

Using em-dashes instead of commas can help break up a sentence that might otherwise be too comma-heavy, which can slow the reader down. Take the following sentence, for example.

John didn’t care about the jitters, the jumpiness, or the inevitable crash, this cup of coffee—his fifth that morning—was necessary.

With that many commas in the sentence already, setting off the clause “his fifth that morning” with more commas would make the sentence too choppy.

Em-dashes can also be used to set apart a clause that’s already contained in parentheses without confusing the reader. For example:

The barista had his order memorized, of course (large double-shot espresso, non-fat milk—God help you if the milk was full fat—heated to exactly 170 degrees), but that didn’t mean she had to like making it so often.

In this sentence, adding the clause within the em-dashes in parentheses within the first set of parentheses would be very confusing for the reader.

Em-dashes in place of commas or parentheses can also be used to add emphasis. The em-dash reads as more intrusive than commas or parentheses, which makes it great for setting apart clauses that demand attention. You might have noticed that in the examples above, the text set off by em-dashes stands apart from the rest of the sentence, calling attention to itself as an interjection.

Finally, em-dashes can replace colons to add a stronger punch to the conclusion of a sentence. For example, take a look at this sentence.

John knew what he would see when he peered into the lightened cup, but his heart sank nonetheless when he confirmed—empty.

You could conclude this sentence with “…confirmed: empty,” but that wouldn’t convey the tragedy of John’s empty coffee cup with the same gravity that an em-dash provides.

With any of these applications, be aware that em-dashes are generally viewed as less formal than other types of punctuation. So while they can spice up a novel or your own personal writing, use with caution in formal or academic writing.

Now down to the details.

If you’ve made the decision to use em-dashes in your text, you’ll want to know how to form them in your word processor. You can use the “insert symbol/special character” function, or, if you’re using Microsoft Word, let it do the work for you. If the option is enabled, Word will automatically convert two consecutive hyphens between words into an em-dash (open Autocorrect options, then AutoFormat, and check the box labeled “replace hyphens with dash”).

The final trap? Spacing. Em-dashes are most commonly deployed with no spaces on either side, so the em-dash is the only character between the two words it separates. The exception is if a publication uses AP style (newspapers are the most commonly seen example). When in doubt, take the spaces out.

 

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Jacki_headshot2 Jacki has been editing professionally since completing her study of the English language at Virginia Commonwealth University in 2012. She has been an Inkwell Book Co. editor since 2013. From memoirs to fiction to fantasy, she can’t resist a good story, and can usually be found at her rural Virginia home with her nose in a book and a cat in her lap.

Monday Morning Edition: Practical Proposals for Winning with Writer’s Block

Today’s Practical Proposal is simply this: write for nine minutes.

Set a timer for nine minutes, hit start, and then write whatever comes into your head. When the timer dings, you stop writing. It’s that easy.

Need more? Try these:

You can develop a new character, or rework an old one.

You can write about what you did yesterday or a year a go.

You can write a letter to friend, family member, coworker, or character.

You can write “I do not know what to write” or “this really sucks” over and over — however, after about 3 minutes of that your creative juices will begin to flow, I promise.

You can find a picture from a magazine or book and make up a story about it.

Or you can try starting with open-ended statements like, “I wish I was…” or “It all began when…” or “December wasn’t usually this cold but…”

Happy Writing! Tweet us @inkwellbookco and let us know what works for you!

-the Inkwell team

 

Monday Morning Edition: Practical Propsals for Winning with Writer’s Block

Writer’s block, again? Gah! That’s the worst. You’re staring at your computer screen (or, if you’re old school, pad of paper) drumming your fingers and wondering why you’re stumped and if it’s too late in life to switch careers.

But there’s hope, people. I promise.

Today’s Practical Proposal for Winning with Writer’s Block is….

Do Something Creative

  1. Paint
  2. Draw
  3. Play an instrument,
  4. Do that craft from Pinterest you thought you could maybekindof do
  5. Scrap-booking
  6. Build a den or fort
  7. Go for a  hike
  8. Listen to music
  9. Watch a movie
  10. Make video
  11. Explore Pinterest, Instagram, or Twitter
  12. Cook or bake, invent a recipe or try something from that one cookbook you have
  13. Play a prank (channel Jim from “The Office” )
  14. Make a sculpture
  15. Do a self portrait
  16. Go driving and get yourself lost, then find your way back
  17. Try a new restaurant
  18. Learn a new skill (like rollerblading or paper mache)
  19. Create a new character and write a day in their life
  20. No matter what, be engaged, be excited, get those creative juices flowing!

Can’t decide what to do? Use this random number generator to pick for you!

Happy Writing! Tweet us @inkwellbookco and let us know what works for you!

-the Inkwell team

Congratulations, Mark….

….you are now a published author!!

IMG_9371aL-R: Sarah Lapallo, Owner and Senior Designer, Cindi Reardon, Mark Reardon, author.

This past Saturday, Mark Reardon had a book launch to announce his new book, Sarah: A Forgotten Patriot. There was a terrific turnout, lots of food, and truly wonderful people.

About the Book:

In 1775 Sarah Hardy is a young newly-wed living the life she had always dreamt about. Suddenly her world explodes. She is dragged into a war she neither understands nor wants any part of. As she follows her husband and his regiment into the wilderness of the northern New York, she begins to learn the meaning- and the cost -of patriotism.

 

In only two years she experiences more of life and death than most people will ever know in a life time. Although she is not a soldier, there is nothing this army will not ask her to do. From scrubbing floors and doing laundry to being a servant for officers or performing duties as a nurse, every new task opens her eyes to the horror that is war.

Follow her as she falls ever further into the abyss of war. Share her fear as she is caught in a fire fight and her horror at the site of men being mutilated on the battlefield. Feel her anguish as she loses friends and relatives to the ravenous beast called war.

 

Through it all, she grows as a women and takes evermore ownership of the war and the situation she finds herself in. She and the women with her grow to become an indispensable part of the army and the war effort. Although little recognition will ever be given to her, or her comrades, she will become a true patriot.

 

IMG_9362aMark hilariously thanking everyone involved in the project, including Jacki and Christina, our wonderful editors.

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Mark’s website, www.MarkReardonBooks.com, was designed by his nephew!

IMG_9376aThey had a poster of his cover printed to use at book signings.

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Lastly, there was a *delicious* cake with the cover on it.

If you’d like to learn more about Mark’s new book, visit his website www.MarkReardonBooks.com

Congratulations, Mark! You’re a published author!

-the Inkwell team

 

 

Our Editor Takes Questions

Q: I just finished writing the first book in my new trilogy. How do I format the name of the series on the title page?

A: There are a few different ways to go about including a series title on your book’s title page. How you format the title will largely depend on how you want the book to be referenced. That is, do you want the book to be identified first and foremost as a singular work, or as a part of the series?

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If you think your series works better or makes more sense as a cohesive unit, then it’s smart to assume it will be referred to by the series title. A good example of this is The Lord of the Rings. The books have individual titles, but the entire story is more commonly known by the series title, because any one of the books would not function as well on its own. In this case, the series title should be italicized, because it’s being used in the same way as any other title. This is also a good option for books with short or ambiguous titles. A book titled Courage, for example, would be difficult for a reader to track down, due to the sheer quantity of existing titles that will include the word. Courage, book 2 of the Deadly Values series, by contrast, gives the reader much more specific information to use when searching for or telling others about your book.

On the other hand, if the book can stand alone as an individual story — say, if the books share a theme but tell their own stories in each — then it’s more likely to be referred to by the book’s title. In this case, the series title acts more as additional information, characterizing the nature of the series without explicitly titling it. An example of this use is found in the Harry Potter series: the series is not technically known by this title, but can be used to offer additional information about any of the books for identification and grouping purposes. In this case, the name of the series would not be italicized, because it is not being used as a formal title.

A good gauge is to ask yourself if a reader could pick up one book in the series without having read the others and still understand and enjoy it.

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Jacki_headshot2Jacki has been editing professionally since completing her study of the English language at Virginia Commonwealth University in 2012. She has been an Inkwell Book Co. editor since 2013. From memoirs to fiction to fantasy, she can’t resist a good story, and can usually be found at her rural Virginia home with her nose in a book and a cat in her lap.